Feedback on our opening

We had a mini assembly where each groups 2 minute openings were shown, 4 teachers including our year head, the deputy head and the headteacher. There were other sixth form students and a year 11 class who were giving us feedback.

Ms Upton - Deputy head:
"Really good! I liked the cup and the milk! Everything was great, story was good, gave me chills."

The rest of the comments are anonymous but here are some:

"Interesting, liked the flashbacks and the flashing credits, gripping, made you want to watch on"

"Music makes suspense, writing looks good and fitting, good cliff hanger of Charlotte actually waking up"

"I liked the combination of what was happening to Leyla visually and the voiceover of her mother (I think) talking to the police"

"I liked the journey through town in a car"

The general feedback was really good, on the whole people said they really liked the credits and the whole flashback, waking up in a field idea. I was pleased with the response we recieved as we worked so hard on our coursework piece.