Twelth draft

This is more or less the final draft of our film opening. The birds sound at the end has been turned down and they carry on onto a black screen which we quite like. We have taken away the shots of Charlotte at the end as they seem quite random and don't really fit in with our opening, and audience feedback also provided us with the idea of taking it out.

I like the way our opening ends with main character 'Leyla' walking down the long path, its really effective and could portray the long journey she is about to undergo in order to find out how she got to where she was!